Writing (2)

Ian made us write this assignment..

My horrible first trip

We felt really excited as the ship sailed towards the harbor. You can’t imagine how happy I had been when my strict daddy had permitted me to go with my best friends for 1 day. This was the first time I had been allowed to go out without any member of my family.

As the ship stopped, my heart started to race. Happiness, nervousness, curiousness were all mixed into one. Without wasting anymore time, we went to our destination, a really famous theme park. When we got there, I was surprised. I hadn’t expected that the theme park was extremely crowded. I couldn’t see anything else other than a horde of humans.

Time went by very fast and when I realized, I had gotten in the ship that took us back to our city. I felt really miserable. All we had done at the theme park was just wait and wait. We hadn’t played anything and I felt sick because of the crowd. I had thought that the trip would be a pleasant one, it, however, just turned into a nightmare.